tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6765389283359119973.post4213166406701770909..comments2023-10-20T12:29:11.465-04:00Comments on C. Patrick Schulze - Author of Born to be Brothers: Writing a Fight SceneC. Patrick Schulzehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17082489938964241713noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6765389283359119973.post-20164878374674122372013-02-22T11:58:06.839-05:002013-02-22T11:58:06.839-05:00If some one ωantѕ expеrt viеw on the toрic of runn...If some one ωantѕ expеrt viеw on the toрic of running a blog thеn i propose <br />hіm/heг to visit thiѕ wеbρage, Keеp uр thе nice job.<br /><br /><br />Feel free tо surf to mу site <a href="http://paigesloans.co.uk" rel="nofollow">payday advance</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6765389283359119973.post-51658965280324295732010-06-30T02:40:50.897-04:002010-06-30T02:40:50.897-04:00In a roleplaying game some years ago one player tr...In a roleplaying game some years ago one player tried to have his character threaten another by kicking open a door and brandishing a desert eagle. It fell flat when the player on the receiving end wondered what a gangster was doing carrying around a large bird.<br /><br />One man's technical terminology is another's everyday language. It's good to be careful :-)Matthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10942701428300441142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6765389283359119973.post-10558569567995545472010-06-22T21:03:21.609-04:002010-06-22T21:03:21.609-04:00Nice to hear from you, Ryan.
Of course you're...Nice to hear from you, Ryan.<br /><br />Of course you're correct. In "Born to be Brothers" I used the example of the "large shotgun" to explain canister. <br /><br />In the post I simply gave an example I know few could identify for the sake of understanding my point.<br /><br />Author's license, perhaps?<br /><br />Take care, Ryan.<br /><br />PatrickC. Patrick Schulzenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6765389283359119973.post-51023569648285885742010-06-22T14:28:33.880-04:002010-06-22T14:28:33.880-04:00Nice post Patrick. However, I disagree when you sa...Nice post Patrick. However, I disagree when you say, "Use technical terminology carefully." Your example of spherical shot, case shot, or canister being collectively called a cannonball is perhaps too simple. Because canister isn't a cannonball, it's a tin that breaks open upon firing. It wouldn't slow the pace down too much to explain that in a single sentence, would it? It'd be very easy to explain the differences within the story (When the cannon fired, it sprayed forth canister, tins packed with musket balls that burst open with each shot, showering the lines with hot iron). The same could be said of the other two examples. Eh?Ryan Quintnoreply@blogger.com